[求助]英语好的帮忙修改下

helenlin903

修改之后的大概如下：

 

A lot of people think that Bible is just an excellent literary works and great work ethic, rather than the real historical facts.  In the middle of the nineteenth century when Darwin's evolutionary theory was proposed, it was a serious challenge to  Bible and a lot of people thought Bible was fiction and unscientific. In order to meet this challenge, there are archaeological evidences showing that Bible tells the truth. Evidences demonstrate that Bible records the old ancient cities and towns. The old ancient literal works Greece These recorded by people is targeted at proving the New Testament, and few evidence for the Old Testament.

 

Yale University archaeologist (Millar Burrows) said: "totally speaking, the archaeological discoveries have no doubt to prove the reliability of Bible. Many archaeologists because of the excavation work in Palestine, of their" Bible, increase the fear in their own heart." Jewish archaeologists Nelson Glueck said:" I can approve that so far all the archaeological findings have no confliction with "Bible." The correct history recorded in the Bible is incomparable, especially when it is used as  the archaeological evidences, especially when it can prove. The world-famous archaeological evidences prove that Bible is real." The world-famous archaeologist Albright in the administration bureau (William F.Albright)’s words can be used  as the historical conclusion: " In eighteenth and nineteenth centuries, many important historical schools are suspicious of the reliability of Bible, although today still part of the school at that time again appeared in the academic community, but said early doubts about the school have gradually been denied.

helenlin903

 

Today "Bible" is printed according to the historical manuscripts. And the original manuscripts of Bible can not be found. So, is  "Bible" today the same as the originals? In other words, manuscripts have been handed down and are they reliable? Let us take a look at the New Testament. Earlier times, the sales volume in this year is equal to the total volume of 100 years. Now it has been  identified that  more than 5000 manuscripts of New Testament  in complete or partial are the oldest manuscripts since the fourth century AD. Each of them is only separated by two or three hundred years. Many New Testament manuscripts in the short time, without comparing to other classical works, fully demonstrate the reliability of New Testament manuscripts.

"Bible" is the largest world's publication and distribution of the total number up to a book and is the first one to be translated into other languages, translation of a book the most, is the first space and the moon was taken to book. The strangest thing is that in thousands years’ time Bible never changes, even doesn’t change one word. There is not any other book in the world which can be compared with Bible. Now a lot of books within two or three years will be reprinted in order to delete some data out-of-date, to add new data and propose a new argument because it is only a book and the truth it demonstrate is relative so that it needs to be amended. But "Bible" is what God implied and the truth revealed in it is absolute, and will never change. Three thousand years passed, with the change of sovereignty, human society has changed dramatically, but the contents of the Bible never change. Two or three hundred years,the productivity increased fast. Science and technology developed day by day and lots of new things came out. But Bible’s reprinted edition still haven’t been changed one word. With the passing time, with the development of science, "Bible" is becoming more dazzling.

helenlin903

 

The powerful words in Bible can be seen everywhere in our lives. How many people never master the letter chi,  but after reading Bible, have become a new person changing first from the inside of the heart then to the outside of the image? How many people have been cured? The drug addicts, the alcoholics, the thieves, the recidivist. Once decision is made, all the bad habits in one night’s time disappear and never meddle.  Many people want to see the miracles but please see the miracles in believing Christ. We never dreamed that in many places of the world, through Bible, God changes people's thoughts. Saving the human’s soul is the greatest miracle. Many friends of mine and I have the same feelings. While reading Bible, sometimes the living scriptures were suddenly coming out from the book. When praying, some unfamiliar sentences come to mind. Often in these moments, these scriptures have greatly affected our lives, our believes and services. Then something changes. They makes us much closer to God, to love and serve God. It is true that some of the unfamiliar words can not play a significant effect, but this is because people fail to accept it in their heart. With the suitable condition, it can grow and breed properly. But with the right conditions, it doesn’t mean that it is not life. People do not accept Bible, but without Bible, there is no power and life. That is why many people notice that the influences on people’s life  arisen by the eager of understanding Bible differs before believing and after believing. The main reason of their believes is completely different.

marylu

现在进展到哪里了，讲完了么？

 

楼上姊妹帮你写那么多，倒是看了没有啊？

tonysung211

以下是引用helenlin903在2009-4-17 13:01:00的发言：

修改之后的大概如下：

 

A lot of people think that Bible is just an excellent literary works and great work ethic, rather than the real historical facts.  In the middle of the nineteenth century when Darwin's evolutionary theory was proposed, it was a serious challenge to  Bible and a lot of people thought Bible was fiction and unscientific. In order to meet this challenge, there are archaeological evidences showing that Bible tells the truth. Evidences demonstrate that Bible records the old ancient cities and towns. The old ancient literal works Greece These recorded by people is targeted at proving the New Testament, and few evidence for the Old Testament.

 

 

【Many People think of the content of the Bible just as being an excellent literary output rather than historical facts. As Darwin's theory of  evolution rised in the middle of the nineteenth century, more and more people begin to believe that the Bible is imaginary and unscientific. It offers  a great challenge to the authority of the Bible. Archaeological, however, meets the challenge. Many acient cities and towns recorded in the Bible have been proved to exist in the history.】 

 

不行了，翻不下去了~~第一段主要是想为翻译的姊妹多提供一些英文行文思路，不一定对，仅供参考。顺便说一句，Bible前应该有定冠词the。

 

真佩服姊妹你的耐心，我的天啊，这样的中文文稿都能看下去~~楼主你也是，好歹也自己整理一下中文嘛，这样翻起来太费劲了~~

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-4-25 2:55:40编辑过]

boldness

以下是引用tonysung211在2009-4-25 2:53:00的发言：

真佩服姊妹你的耐心，我的天啊，这样的中文文稿都能看下去~~楼主你也是，好歹也自己整理一下中文嘛，这样翻起来太费劲了~~

同感。所以看了一下就放弃了，实在没有时间啊。

其实楼主为什么不去找找《铁证待判》这本书，介绍了很多关于《圣经》的权威和历史的考证。应该可以找到英文原版的。

helenlin903

哈哈这些都是举手之劳拉。多谢弟兄们的称赞。愿赞美都归予主。

 

其实就怕翻译的不贴切。中文看的比较费劲。希望能够给楼主一点点帮助也好拉。